Paul’s Story Trigonometry is a useful way of visualising the central conflict in a story. By
using such a model, you can gain critical insight into your story: Have you
identified the central conflict? Do you understand the main characters’ desires
and resulting actions? Do these opposing courses of action collide (climax)?
And is the story resolution integral to the conflict (not incidental)?
Model 1: Two main characters
Model 1 Explanation:
Desire: Three human desires: to have, to
become, to be freed from.
Action
objective: the action the character takes to try and satisfy
their desire.
Tension: arising
through the opposing character desires and resulting actions (opposing forces).
Climax: Where
these two opposing action objectives finally collide.
Resolution:
The result of these two opposing desires and action objectives.
Model 1 Example: Lost and Found by Oliver Jeffers.
First published by Harper Collins Children’s Books in
2005, Lost and Found is a delightful illustrated book by Oliver Jeffers. From
the book’s back cover: “Once there was a boy and one day he found a penguin at
his door…”
Here is
the story model:
As seen from the model above, the conflict in this
story comes about through a humorous misunderstanding; and the climax is a
revelation for the boy (who is a little lonely too). See also how the resolution
is integral to the story: loneliness is resolved for both the boy and penguin,
and a beautiful friendship blossoms.
Model 2: multiple
main characters
The story trigonometry model can also be expanded to
encompass multiple main characters. The model below shows 3 main characters:
The above model shows a central character with two
other main characters.
Model 2
Example: Matilda by Roald Dahl
A much-loved story by Roald Dahl, Matilda was first
published in 1988. With such memorable characters as Matilda Wormwood, Miss
Trunchbull, and Miss Honey (to name a few), Matilda is bound to be enjoyed by
readers for generations to come. Here’s a model based on three main characters:
From the above example, the relationship between the
main characters, their desires and “action objectives” are clear. The story
tension arises (in part) through conflict (Matilda / Trunchbull) and the
mystery behind Miss Honey and the unfolding friendship (Matilda / Miss Honey).
The model could be expanded to include other characters such as Matilda’s
parents.
Using the
model
By sketching out the central story conflict early in
your writing, you can readily discover or gain a strong sense of the story
outcome. You may not know the details of this outcome (How exactly does Matilda
and Miss Honey defeat Miss Trunchbull?), but with the general outcome in mind
(Miss Trunchbull is defeated, Matilda lives with Miss Honey), you can write
towards it, enjoying all the discoveries along the way.
Paul Malone
is an Australian writer living in Austria. His short stories have appeared in
leading children’s literary publications, including The School Magazine
(Australia) and Scoop Magazine (UK). When not writing his own stories, he runs
the occasional writing workshop in Vienna. He also loves meeting other SCBWI
members! More about Paul here:
